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Forum: Poetry 01-31-2018, 05:03 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 757
Posted By Hidrolic
Thanks for the read...Iím glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for the read...Iím glad you enjoyed it.
Forum: Poetry 01-12-2018, 11:48 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,723
Posted By Hidrolic
I love the way you wrote this piece...it was very...

I love the way you wrote this piece...it was very visual for me. Thank you.
Forum: Poetry 01-12-2018, 11:45 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 255
Posted By Hidrolic
Itís not about getting glasses but more so about...

Itís not about getting glasses but more so about having vision. Vision of the here and now and vision of the future.
Forum: Poetry 01-11-2018, 04:28 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 255
Posted By Hidrolic
Thanks for the read...I like your version.

Thanks for the read...I like your version.
Forum: Poetry 01-11-2018, 06:24 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 255
Posted By Hidrolic
2020

My vision is like the year
Still sitting here
But I had visions that I was there
Not a magician but my premonitions are usually clear
Iím guided by sight and itís precision I use to steer
On a...
Forum: Poetry 08-28-2017, 04:11 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,869
Posted By Hidrolic
Haven't read anything this good in a while...I...

Haven't read anything this good in a while...I just loved it...The piece felt so massive as if I was spread across the galaxy watching you as you wrote it.
Forum: Poetry 08-26-2017, 05:56 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 757
Posted By Hidrolic
Thank you...yes I agree that the new generation...

Thank you...yes I agree that the new generation will improve race relations.
Forum: Poetry 08-26-2017, 05:54 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 609
Posted By Hidrolic
I like the structure but not the wording...Glad...

I like the structure but not the wording...Glad you liked it. Thanks for the help.
Forum: Poetry 08-26-2017, 05:04 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,004
Posted By Hidrolic
I like this piece....it's pretty dark but very...

I like this piece....it's pretty dark but very visual at the same time. While reading I felt as if I was there seeing what you were writing. Great job.
Forum: Poetry 08-25-2017, 12:12 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 609
Posted By Hidrolic
Ready

If it's my time I'm ready
I never lived a life of crime
Or laid with swine
But if it's my time I'm ready
I never had innate hate by design
Or tried to alter another's state of mind
But if it's...
Forum: Poetry 08-25-2017, 12:01 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 757
Posted By Hidrolic
The Times

I no longer murmur when I'm stopped
Never drove around with a burner in my lap
Cause I can't meet my end getting murdered by a cop
It's unfortunate I have to live with this burden on my back
It...
Forum: Poetry 04-13-2016, 02:47 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 839
Posted By Hidrolic
I understand what you mean...I will give his work...

I understand what you mean...I will give his work a read, thank you.
Forum: Poetry 04-13-2016, 05:39 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 839
Posted By Hidrolic
Any suggestion as to what I can read to gain...

Any suggestion as to what I can read to gain better control?
Forum: Poetry 04-06-2016, 12:51 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 839
Posted By Hidrolic
Loss

They placed the earth over his frame
They said he returned to the essence
But it was a blessing he came
His mother couldn't be restrained
She spoke bluntly confessing the pain
I tried hard to...
Forum: Poetry 09-24-2015, 12:29 PM
Replies: 8
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Posted By Hidrolic
Thanks for reading

Thanks for reading
Forum: Poetry 09-20-2015, 05:53 AM
Replies: 8
He
Views: 720
Posted By Hidrolic
Ok good for you.

Ok good for you.
Forum: Poetry 09-20-2015, 05:53 AM
Replies: 8
He
Views: 720
Posted By Hidrolic
It is more like a song...thanks for the read.

It is more like a song...thanks for the read.
Forum: Poetry 09-19-2015, 12:23 PM
Replies: 8
He
Views: 720
Posted By Hidrolic
He

He stands by my side hold me tight hold me close
He stands by my side like my Saint Holy Ghost
I stand with my hand by my side as I slide down this slope
But I stand firm with my pride cause he'll...
Forum: Poetry 07-14-2015, 04:56 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,120
Posted By Hidrolic
I enjoyed this one Lon...Love the imagery. Great...

I enjoyed this one Lon...Love the imagery. Great write.
Forum: Poetry 07-14-2015, 04:53 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,831
Posted By Hidrolic
No I don't think I'm upsetting you at all...I...

No I don't think I'm upsetting you at all...I just think you need to relax. That's all.
Forum: Poetry 07-14-2015, 01:34 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,059
Posted By Hidrolic
lol no not Christian rap at all...Just my 2 cents.

lol no not Christian rap at all...Just my 2 cents.
Forum: Poetry 07-14-2015, 01:32 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,831
Posted By Hidrolic
There you go being anal again. Take it easy...

There you go being anal again. Take it easy buddy. You seem like that one guy in the room who's always serious and ruins everyones good time. Smoke some cannabis and chill a little.
Forum: Poetry 07-14-2015, 10:17 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,831
Posted By Hidrolic
Relax Lonny...it's ok buddy. No need to be so...

Relax Lonny...it's ok buddy. No need to be so anal all the time, breath with ease.
Forum: Poetry 07-13-2015, 08:35 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,831
Posted By Hidrolic
I see the beauty in the way you write You...

I see the beauty in the way you write
You believe in yourself
And do things the way you like
Some say it's wrong
But in a way it's right
Don't follow their thoughts
Your art is great despite...
Forum: Poetry 07-13-2015, 08:25 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,059
Posted By Hidrolic
Sex Without Purpose

I heard of these times in a book I read
Where Tony married Tommy and Sally looked like Fred
The blessed book, the best book, the good book I said
Could be a perversion of the mind so I shook my...
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