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Forum: Poetry 03-12-2008, 12:16 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 637
Posted By Andrew M Gold
Icon10 yellow Underwater Blue

And the silence perfumes madness
With a drifting scent; the words
Stand tall, lonely and oh so square
Like Wise Old Men, deciding
Their fate and times: skipping,
On the dotted-line through...
Forum: Poetry 02-29-2008, 08:34 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 693
Posted By Andrew M Gold
Icon2 sanity is the new Crazy

twenty ten,
tra lala
in the wake of a comet,
bloody roads of sky
tumble down in lanes and dots
to fool you into fashion.
i could write more about
a single heaven gracing abodes
if it weren't...
Forum: Poetry 01-04-2008, 04:09 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 933
Posted By Andrew M Gold
Icon2 i prefer the second one; don't got much to say...

i prefer the second one; don't got much to say but i loved the thing from beginning to end, especially the end!
Forum: Poetry 01-03-2008, 02:09 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 672
Posted By Andrew M Gold
Icon1 elementropy

a brooding New York skyscraping weather
meets a sunny Californian blue wave
smack dead in a bronzed Missouri, awash
in storm and gale. The loveless provide
home for disease to rail upon, soft,...
Forum: Poetry 12-11-2007, 05:56 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 554
Posted By Andrew M Gold
wooden childhood

i know this is a bit chaotic; i'd appreciate any comments on how i could unify this or anything else, thanx

we were born
on that same day our
parent's
fucked; birthed
destine-(y)-ed love....
Forum: Poetry 11-24-2007, 03:48 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 703
Posted By Andrew M Gold
Higher Walls for Someone Else

where are those kids
who roamed the glazed streets
looking for drugs in the rain?
who broke
into unmarked white
cars to smoke stale cigars?

that morning which
we came to know the twilight of...
Forum: Poetry 11-03-2007, 10:32 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 491
Posted By Andrew M Gold
Pehistoric?

The club of a caveman
waving in the brown heat
like a cool paintbrush
ing up against a sabre
toothed-tiger's jaw;

locked inside a portrait.

the melody of attack
syncing to all rhythms,
Forum: Poetry 11-01-2007, 11:38 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 570
Posted By Andrew M Gold
Waning Luster Lobster

and i had almost given up!
picture me reading that empty
Bright Orange thing with limbs
and leaves and a fire place to burn
Chinese food like our grotesque stomachs
in the wet dandelion wants of...
Forum: Poetry 09-08-2007, 12:40 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 850
Posted By Andrew M Gold
likenes

abandoned artwork
i walk next to a tree
and crack a smile

there is nothing
to say that would ever
be green enough

i am parched,
i write this on parchment
Forum: Poetry 08-27-2007, 11:35 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 674
Posted By Andrew M Gold
hey thanks a lot for taking the time. i think...

hey thanks a lot for taking the time. i think some of the additions weren't needed, but it doesn't really matter. i'll have to think about this and compare the two and take the best of both worlds....
Forum: Poetry 08-25-2007, 10:57 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 674
Posted By Andrew M Gold
By the way, thanks for reading guys

By the way, thanks for reading guys
Forum: Poetry 08-25-2007, 09:36 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 674
Posted By Andrew M Gold
I tried writing this as quick as I could so to...

I tried writing this as quick as I could so to hold onto the initial thread of feeling... I'm pleased with this version, so in one way or another, unconsciously or not, I suppose it was
Forum: Poetry 08-24-2007, 03:10 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 674
Posted By Andrew M Gold
Waiting

Not sure how this will be perceived. eager to hear your comments! this is kind of a departure for me in some ways. And, it's properly capitalized! ;)

A man said, "I have a life."
He spent it all...
Forum: Poetry 08-24-2007, 03:06 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,026
Posted By Andrew M Gold
Ah wow thanks guys. From the bottom up: yea i...

Ah wow thanks guys. From the bottom up:
yea i do like that better, Gary, thanks. didn't notice that pattern, interesting...
Voodoo: Thankya for comin back! I really noticed your point when you...
Forum: Poetry 08-16-2007, 12:25 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,026
Posted By Andrew M Gold
thank you all i appreciate the words. ill really...

thank you all i appreciate the words. ill really take it into consideration.. i always have a hard time changing stuff after i've written it.. lemme see what i can do with all these crits. . .
...
Forum: Poetry 08-16-2007, 12:22 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 999
Posted By Andrew M Gold
yea i see how it did sort of change from feeling...

yea i see how it did sort of change from feeling of poetic verse to prose... but it didn't bother me.. i loved it actually. i think what was best about this was how it seemed to turn to your whims,...
Forum: Poetry 08-16-2007, 12:16 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 554
Posted By Andrew M Gold
eating up that whitespace

always wondered at the white
space others used with words
to bring out some natural align-
ment. this, while constantly
eating, chewing, spitting seeds
out the window at passing
structures that...
Forum: Poetry 08-15-2007, 12:09 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,026
Posted By Andrew M Gold
an end to an end

searching, seeking.

no glass, no sand. deepblack--
a cockroach slowly creeps, antennae
scraping coldwhite linoleum

i want to know why, to memorize
this skiddish, broken path to...
Forum: Poetry 08-02-2007, 12:06 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 583
Posted By Andrew M Gold
last night's concept

above the grass between
my arms- the smell of her hair
even in my dreams I've learned
to let go
Forum: Poetry 08-01-2007, 02:06 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 549
Posted By Andrew M Gold
Icon2 Eclipse

footprints reduced to
pale shadows hovering
in the ocean sand
Forum: Poetry 07-13-2007, 06:15 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,258
Posted By Andrew M Gold
i took a walk today, was listening to music... i...

i took a walk today, was listening to music... i love the feeling of this

"Down at the end, round by the corner.
Close to the edge, just by a river.
Seasons will pass you by.
I get up, I get...
Forum: Poetry 07-13-2007, 06:10 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 885
Posted By Andrew M Gold
Like it. Like it a lot... pretty somber tone, i...

Like it. Like it a lot... pretty somber tone, i get from this. It resonates somewhere in me that I can't quite place; i dunn0, i like the 'isness' of this a lot... Maybe i'm just in a somber mood......
Forum: Poetry 07-13-2007, 06:01 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 661
Posted By Andrew M Gold
thank you

god
your green robe makes me wonder

as

emptiness owns the form you stare into,
fumbling fingers of ours . . . those digits

of clicking infinity, random melodies
Forum: Poetry 07-13-2007, 05:59 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 760
Posted By Andrew M Gold
i feel like you really dug deep down for this...

i feel like you really dug deep down for this one. i bet it was awesome writing this. So integrated... it's like music, definitely, and it catches my heartbeat. I have rewally been into rhythm...
Forum: Poetry 07-12-2007, 12:30 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 766
Posted By Andrew M Gold
sappyness speach from the preachiest of liars and cake!

like bees to flowers, so are the sands of our hours
like pointless aphrodesia, braindead amnesia
speaking to the riddle with what i've built

fried chicken and polar bear
grease; silly putty...
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