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Forum: Fiction 01-27-2018, 04:53 PM
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Posted By daes13
Be that hard. Its nice to have people say they...

Be that hard. Its nice to have people say they like your work but until someone tells you its shit then you never progress. People are always gonna be nice, they will try their damnedest to be...
Forum: Fiction 01-27-2018, 03:00 PM
Replies: 39
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Posted By daes13
Break that style, one of the hardest things I...

Break that style, one of the hardest things I ever did. Luckily I have an amazing woman that calls me on my shit. Kindest thing she ever did was say I write like shit. That now influences my new...
Forum: Fiction 01-27-2018, 02:22 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 2,763
Posted By daes13
Think style, or voice as people want to say, as...

Think style, or voice as people want to say, as opposed to ideal. The way you wrote above is for young adult, but the material is adult, right it however is best for your story. Change the material...
Forum: Fiction 01-26-2018, 03:51 PM
Replies: 39
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Posted By daes13
Philip K Dick has been a major influence on me...

Philip K Dick has been a major influence on me recently, so yes agreed
Forum: Fiction 01-26-2018, 03:22 PM
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Views: 2,763
Posted By daes13
I like the inherent story itself, this could be...

I like the inherent story itself, this could be very visceral. But, unless you are catering this to a young adult audience rewrite with a different style, and try in medias res, and let the...
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