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Forum: Poetry 05-11-2018, 05:13 AM
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Posted By Leila
Nicely done, direct and passionate, with apt use...

Nicely done, direct and passionate, with apt use of imagery. The only thing that doesn't quite work for me is line 4 - feels a bit redundant.
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