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Forum: Fiction 08-26-2016, 08:26 AM
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Views: 626
Posted By GinaRene'
War of the Shadows Chapter 3....1900 words

Lena burst awake, her stomach lurched, heart thundering in her chest, and every muscle tightened like a snare. With wide eyes, she searched the corners of the room, flipping from shadow to shadow in...
Forum: Fiction 08-24-2016, 02:30 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 791
Posted By GinaRene'
Thank you Max Crash, Your comments have been...

Thank you Max Crash,
Your comments have been helpful.

My computer generally catches when I miss type the 'your' and 'you're'. I love to read and write stories, but spelling is not my forte. (I...
Forum: Fiction 08-23-2016, 06:34 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 791
Posted By GinaRene'
I am still trying to figure out how to use this...

I am still trying to figure out how to use this site. I write my stories with one and a half spaces between lines and double spaces between indented paragraphs. But it all disappears once I post...
Forum: Fiction 08-23-2016, 06:30 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 791
Posted By GinaRene'
War of the Shadows Chapter 2....1900 words

Restless
Darion leaned forward on the dining room chair, elbows resting on his knees while he sharpened the edge of his blade with a rough stone. His mind focused on the human sleeping in his bed....
Forum: Fiction 08-23-2016, 06:20 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 687
Posted By GinaRene'
Thank you for the useful information. I...

Thank you for the useful information. I completely see what you are saying about the Jack and Holly and the counting paces. The counting paces is a character quirk that will come in handy later, but...
Forum: Fiction 08-22-2016, 08:39 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 715
Posted By GinaRene'
This scene is intense. There are some spelling...

This scene is intense.
There are some spelling and grammar errors. I feel like there a lot of characters introduced but I have no way to identify them from each other. Doc was the only one I felt...
Forum: Fiction 08-21-2016, 09:03 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 837
Posted By GinaRene'
I find it difficult to write first person point...

I find it difficult to write first person point of view, so good for you.
Max crash's comment on the I's is spot on. Since the reader knows 'who' is speaking, it is not always necessary to put in...
Forum: Fiction 08-21-2016, 08:23 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 665
Posted By GinaRene'
It is difficult to critique a rough draft because...

It is difficult to critique a rough draft because most likely it isn't nearly where you want it to be when finished. But I was a little confused at the beginning with all the 'he's, no real...
Forum: Fiction 08-21-2016, 06:29 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 687
Posted By GinaRene'
War of the Shadows Chapter 1....3300 word count

Encounter

The promise of daylight peeked over the city with just enough light to add some color to an overcast sky. Lena stepped into the morning air, pulling the door closed behind her. Shutting...
Forum: Introductions 08-21-2016, 04:08 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 706
Posted By GinaRene'
I am pleased to see that writers can have a sense...

I am pleased to see that writers can have a sense of humor.
Forum: Members' Feedback 08-21-2016, 04:05 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 2,656
Posted By GinaRene'
Is anyone there?

I have only been on WB for maybe twenty four hours, but I just noticed that the dates from recent activity are from weeks ago. Is it because it's summer so less people are home writing or am I...
Forum: Members' Feedback 08-21-2016, 03:44 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 4,474
Posted By GinaRene'
I personally find writing to be an emotional...

I personally find writing to be an emotional experience. It's difficult to write a love scene when feeling angry at your spouse.
An accomplished writer once said, 'Keep writing, and don't delete.'...
Forum: Introductions 08-21-2016, 03:40 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 706
Posted By GinaRene'
You will be so mesmerized by my creative writing...

You will be so mesmerized by my creative writing that you will indeed believe that I am a perfect '10' in the naked body category.
Did I mention, I'm a bit of a dreamer?
Forum: Members' Feedback 08-21-2016, 08:58 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 3,796
Posted By GinaRene'
I understand the frustration with the multiple...

I understand the frustration with the multiple posts requirement. I am new to WB and started with the intention of throwing myself into the forums and showing my writing before I got cold feet. But I...
Forum: Introductions 08-21-2016, 08:17 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 798
Posted By GinaRene'
Hello

Hello,
I am also new to WB. What genre do you like to write? I write mostly fantasy, I like magical worlds.

Welcome!
Forum: Introductions 08-20-2016, 05:52 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 706
Posted By GinaRene'
Greetings!

My name is GinaRene', I have been writing for about six years, yet never shared my stories beyond my household, because I didn't want people to know the kind of crazy stuff that rolled around inside...
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