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Forum: Nine and Sixty Ways Poetry Tools and Lessons 03-17-2013, 11:29 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 3,474
Posted By nhassan
Cinquain- Home

Home
Take me
Back to fast tracks
Of sublime time and space,
Of prime leagues and fatigues... Take me to
Tokyo.
Forum: Nine and Sixty Ways Poetry Tools and Lessons 03-13-2013, 05:06 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 3,613
Posted By nhassan
Thank you, I will give it a try.

Thank you, I will give it a try.
Forum: Nine and Sixty Ways Poetry Tools and Lessons 03-12-2013, 03:26 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 3,613
Posted By nhassan
Cinquain - Despair

Despair
The hunt
For purpose, drive,
Passion... lonely, shady...
My light ran out, I have fallen
Face down.
Forum: Nine and Sixty Ways Poetry Tools and Lessons 03-11-2013, 07:40 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 3,569
Posted By nhassan
Cinquain - Ink

Ink
It fills
Papers, brains not
Schools and thoughts in utter
Vain... screaming in vacuums of bucks
Wasted
Forum: Poetry 03-10-2013, 03:25 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 393
Posted By nhassan
Icon7 thank you Naica, i am new at this so i would...

thank you Naica, i am new at this so i would appreciate all the criticism i can get
Forum: Poetry 03-10-2013, 03:22 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 242
Posted By nhassan
standard

beat. this
beat. that
no fix
standard
just rollin'
humankind
but within
solid rock
Forum: Introductions 03-09-2013, 03:37 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 402
Posted By nhassan
Nesma Hassan

nomad at heart
nomad at mind
no man can ever have it all
so move on..

I have a thing for informal writing, jotting down thoughts, but havent done that in a while so ive gone quite rusty.. i...
Forum: Poetry 03-09-2013, 03:33 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 393
Posted By nhassan
Back from Tokyo

naturally, i'd expect a lot from you
far under ground or far at sea
to change the world without a word
uttering so loudly the beautiful hue
of mother nature and the genius it be
and how you and...
Forum: Poetry 03-09-2013, 03:29 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 525
Posted By nhassan
your work is very inspiring Nacia!

your work is very inspiring Nacia!
Forum: Poetry 03-09-2013, 03:27 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 378
Posted By nhassan
i like the build-up!

i like the build-up!
Forum: Poetry 03-09-2013, 03:19 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 604
Posted By nhassan
Good write however I feel your poem would be...

Good write however I feel your poem would be stronger if your lines were a word or two shorter..
Forum: Poetry 03-09-2013, 03:05 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 372
Posted By nhassan
incredible!

incredible!
Forum: Poetry 03-09-2013, 02:56 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,029
Posted By nhassan
Icon14 love the simple beat and the vast depth of...

love the simple beat and the vast depth of meanings!
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