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Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-27-2013, 02:21 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 6,607
Posted By MightieMousie
I don't see the boundaries. Imagination is...

I don't see the boundaries. Imagination is unlimited, conveying what you imagine is only limited by your skill.
If you got the chops, go for it!
Where imagination is concerned, rules were made to...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-27-2013, 02:05 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 564
Posted By MightieMousie
Public speaking can be tough. Some tips: ...

Public speaking can be tough.

Some tips:
-Write in your speaking voice. The more natural your word choices and phrasings are the easier it will be to say.
^What is important is conveying your...
Forum: The Notice Board 03-26-2013, 09:14 PM
Replies: 79
Views: 24,837
Posted By MightieMousie
Icon14 It's a pity that we could not limit the...

It's a pity that we could not limit the percentage of change to the first post in a thread... so that, say, no more than a 50% alteration could be made. That would keep people from deleting the OP,...
Forum: Fiction 03-02-2013, 05:07 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,119
Posted By MightieMousie
A lot of SPaG, but I completely understood the...

A lot of SPaG, but I completely understood the use of the "' for quotations in dialogue, what threw me was the lack of speaker tags at some points.

Redemption for Firth will be a tough sell with...
Forum: Fiction 03-02-2013, 04:25 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 819
Posted By MightieMousie
Wonderful to learn some history on Kal! Another...

Wonderful to learn some history on Kal! Another great installment, very visual all the way through. Well done!

Um... you keep using 'worst' when it should be 'worse'. It wouldn't be a big deal...
Forum: Fiction 02-26-2013, 09:49 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 764
Posted By MightieMousie
I have wondered since the prologue if Michael was...

I have wondered since the prologue if Michael was the one who attacked her... the more we hear him speak, the more I wonder. He constantly runs her down and is so self-absorbed. This guy needs to...
Forum: Fiction 02-26-2013, 09:12 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 757
Posted By MightieMousie
*Tries not to laugh harshly at Randy's plight* ...

*Tries not to laugh harshly at Randy's plight*

Another fine installment! This story is coming along nicely.

There are some punctuation issues, as in missing punctuation, but I am sure you can...
Forum: Fiction 02-26-2013, 09:02 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,426
Posted By MightieMousie
No, that dog of his bit a sizable chunk off his...

No, that dog of his bit a sizable chunk off his rear end.

^^^YES!!!^^^ *Does the happy dance* Pork chops for Bosco!

I am surprised no one else caught this... the first mention of the rape has...
Forum: Fiction 02-26-2013, 08:23 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,068
Posted By MightieMousie
Oprah 3:16. Wanted dead, but not alive. ...

Oprah 3:16.

Wanted dead, but not alive.

... too... fricking... funny!!!

Not sure if any of the other 'editors' caught it, but you used 'tale' when it should have been 'tail'.

Loving this...
Forum: Fiction 02-26-2013, 07:53 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 958
Posted By MightieMousie
Okay... I have slept, have reread this...

Okay... I have slept, have reread this installment and aside from battling a slight headache, I am up and ready to go again!

I like the scene and I am keeping it, as is... though I would like to...
Forum: Fiction 02-20-2013, 06:53 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 958
Posted By MightieMousie
Sorry to disappoint.

Sorry to disappoint.
Forum: Fiction 02-18-2013, 06:37 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 958
Posted By MightieMousie
Icon1 Tinmen Part 14 (Adult language and themes, violence)

This is a science fiction romance. There is adult language and themes. IF I include a love scene, it will likely be alluded to when posted here, but edited out, and I may decide to post just the...
Forum: Fiction 02-15-2013, 06:17 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 857
Posted By MightieMousie
Rooster, LOL @ cyborgs and vampires! I...

Rooster,

LOL @ cyborgs and vampires! I think maybe lycanthropes go through it too. :)

Yeah, after our discussion on part 12 I went through and edited out the present tense. Switching tenses...
Forum: Fiction 02-12-2013, 11:03 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,042
Posted By MightieMousie
*Grumbles and kicks self* Yes... I see that. ...

*Grumbles and kicks self* Yes... I see that. That would be because I wrote all of that in one sitting. Well hell... editing it now.

MM
Forum: Fiction 02-12-2013, 01:02 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,042
Posted By MightieMousie
Thank you, oldron! --- Rooster, ...

Thank you, oldron!

---

Rooster,

Dang it! Um, it was a complete slip up. It was left over present tense from the dream sequence. Hate it when my tense spills over.

Thank you for the...
Forum: Fiction 02-12-2013, 12:59 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,018
Posted By MightieMousie
Thank you, Domenic for reading and taking the...

Thank you, Domenic for reading and taking the time to help out!

MM
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-12-2013, 12:51 AM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,775
Posted By MightieMousie
That I am aware of, please correct me if I am...

That I am aware of, please correct me if I am wrong, USA is the only country in the western hemisphere with the word "america" as a part of its name. Which is why people from Brazil are Brazilians,...
Forum: Poetry 02-11-2013, 12:42 AM
Replies: 44
Views: 3,072
Posted By MightieMousie
Try it and find out. It has for me.

Try it and find out. It has for me.
Forum: Fiction 02-09-2013, 09:49 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 857
Posted By MightieMousie
Tinmen Part 13 (Adult language and themes, violence)

This is a science fiction romance. There is adult language and themes. IF I include a love scene, it will likely be alluded to when posted here, but edited out, and I may decide to post just the...
Forum: Fiction 02-08-2013, 02:52 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 649
Posted By MightieMousie
I like it, made me think of the movie Inception,...

I like it, made me think of the movie Inception, and there is certainly a lot of fertile ground to cover there.
I rather invision this as a prologue to be followed by... well, the rest of the story....
Forum: Fiction 02-08-2013, 02:35 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 911
Posted By MightieMousie
So I've been told, or maybe not... I may have...

So I've been told, or maybe not... I may have misunderstood. :)
Forum: Fiction 02-08-2013, 02:31 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,145
Posted By MightieMousie
I'll go back and take a look at my copy again and...

I'll go back and take a look at my copy again and see where I can tighten it up. :)

Thank you,
MM
Forum: Fiction 02-07-2013, 02:30 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,202
Posted By MightieMousie
I loved the whole hippie raiders stuff, I just...

I loved the whole hippie raiders stuff, I just think the Jerry S part was too typical of an actual Jerry S show.
I know it you wanted it to be recognizable, I just think you could have amped it way...
Forum: Fiction 02-07-2013, 03:50 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,202
Posted By MightieMousie
Rooster, I know I am into it when I find...

Rooster,

I know I am into it when I find myself talking to the characters...
"Freddie was bi."

Yeah, yeah, yeah, so there's SPaG... big whoop. The Springer thing was a bit of a groan, perhaps...
Forum: Fiction 02-07-2013, 03:09 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 893
Posted By MightieMousie
I see absolutely nothing wrong with the ending. ...

I see absolutely nothing wrong with the ending. To me it is a beautiful rendering of the chain of life. An adult lives in a big world, a child is born into a small one and grows into the big one,...
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