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Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-14-2008, 07:09 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 633
Posted By Lorlie
Hello!

Hey All,

I just wanted to take a moment out to say 'hello'.

Spending time browsing the boards has not been possible for some time due to other commitments and the age old problem of time not...
Forum: Publishing 02-19-2008, 10:13 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 2,011
Posted By Lorlie
Well done Josie, Hard work pays off...

Well done Josie,

Hard work pays off sometimes, and you are living proof of it, hard work and talent of course.

All my very best.

Lorlie
Forum: Writers' Cafe 01-25-2008, 02:15 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,301
Posted By Lorlie
Dayum the organism that steers this thing. I...

Dayum the organism that steers this thing.

I had said lovely stuff already all about how you need not fear judgment, and how just being in the moment before the moment is snatched is most...
Forum: Poetry 01-23-2008, 05:20 AM
Replies: 52
Views: 4,833
Posted By Lorlie
Hey Baron, A joy to read, your use of...

Hey Baron,


A joy to read, your use of words in this one is simplistic and I felt compelled to read it a number of times.
Sad yes, but seemingly inevitable.

Great read.

Lorlie
Forum: Poetry 01-18-2008, 12:56 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 782
Posted By Lorlie
Hey O Connell, Thanks for the reply. ...

Hey O Connell,


Thanks for the reply.

Nice to see another country person here.
No have not seen big fish, but will put it on my list of things to look out for.
Nice to meet you.

Lorlie
Forum: Writers' Cafe 01-18-2008, 12:51 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 2,117
Posted By Lorlie
Ehh, Mine looks fine. All looks good here,...

Ehh, Mine looks fine.

All looks good here, as Barbera Streisand once said, you just look like you, but not in colour.

Good stuff,


Lorlie
Forum: Poetry 01-11-2008, 09:10 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 833
Posted By Lorlie
Hey L&T, I liked the message you are going...

Hey L&T,

I liked the message you are going for here. I too agree with QOW and Baron, it seems like there is a great poignancy in here.

Lorlie
Forum: Writing Markets 01-11-2008, 09:01 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,583
Posted By Lorlie
Hey Kal, I just get garbled lines of non...

Hey Kal,

I just get garbled lines of non print when I try to access the individual work.

Lorlie
Forum: Previous Contests 01-11-2008, 08:47 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,238
Posted By Lorlie
Dorie, The ideal weight is as elusive as the...

Dorie,

The ideal weight is as elusive as the end of the rainbow. Even if you find, what you think it is, its won't make you a better person. Don't beat yourself up, it's January a time for...
Forum: Introductions 01-11-2008, 08:42 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 944
Posted By Lorlie
Hey Lauren, Welcome to the site, glad you...

Hey Lauren,


Welcome to the site, glad you decided to join the mayhem.
I look forward to reading you.

Lorlie
Forum: Poetry 01-11-2008, 08:40 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 782
Posted By Lorlie
Hey Jack, Thank you made the change, glad...

Hey Jack,

Thank you made the change, glad you liked. I only realized yesterday, that for all my waffling, I have never posted a poem here.

Hey Lauren,

Well clever you. This is about my dad,...
Forum: Poetry 01-11-2008, 05:01 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 782
Posted By Lorlie
Thank you Baron for reading and commenting. ...

Thank you Baron for reading and commenting.

Thanks Chloe,

You know if I were to be really honest, I posted this purely to test it's reaction. It has sat on my desk for a long time, and I feel...
Forum: Poetry 01-10-2008, 04:00 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 782
Posted By Lorlie
Hollywood & Dragons.

There were always fragments of truth in his words. . .

We knew dragons lived in times gone past
but we doubted that one had ever carried
him across a sea so blue,
that he watched a Mermaid...
Forum: Poetry 01-09-2008, 01:14 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,325
Posted By Lorlie
Great work on the edit. Gives it more to grab...

Great work on the edit. Gives it more to grab onto.

Well done.

Lorlie
Forum: Poetry 01-07-2008, 03:04 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,308
Posted By Lorlie
Hey Chloe, Good to read you again, and a...

Hey Chloe,

Good to read you again, and a thumbs up for tackling this.
I too would prefer Sat upon, as the start and there were a few other little tids, but to be honest I will wait for your edit....
Forum: Board Games 01-07-2008, 03:00 AM
Replies: 12,150
Views: 257,685
Posted By Lorlie
I am stuffed to the proverbial gills, I am...

I am stuffed to the proverbial gills,
I am trying to get back to earth,
I am going to have another coffee and mull it over!!
Forum: Poetry 01-05-2008, 12:28 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,587
Posted By Lorlie
Hey Blackwolf, Of course you may ask,...

Hey Blackwolf,


Of course you may ask, it's from my heart.

That sounds vomity :ack2: but it's the truth I find for weeks I can manage not to even want to write my name and then, I go weeks...
Forum: Poetry 01-03-2008, 09:02 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,325
Posted By Lorlie
Hey L&T (great nic BTW). I really enjoyed...

Hey L&T (great nic BTW).

I really enjoyed this, I did prefer the She He format, and like the others would love to see a second last stanza. Nice work.


Lorlie
Forum: Poetry 01-03-2008, 07:57 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,587
Posted By Lorlie
Hey Blackwolf, I aught not have missed you,...

Hey Blackwolf,

I aught not have missed you, but alas the feeling of being half has followed me oe'r the waves,. LOL
OK that is perhaps taking it a little too far.

I loved the poem, like...
Forum: Poetry 01-03-2008, 06:06 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 934
Posted By Lorlie
Hey there, I had to do the out loud reading...

Hey there,

I had to do the out loud reading on this, hence my dog is looking at me like I may be insane!!
I much preferred the first version, it had more punch to it, and while I can not pretend...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 01-03-2008, 05:31 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 703
Posted By Lorlie
How sad for the poor soul who has gone to meet...

How sad for the poor soul who has gone to meet his maker, I can only imagine of all the places he were to spend his last night and close his eyes to sleep, this perhaps would have been one of the...
Forum: Writing Markets 01-03-2008, 05:28 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 5,147
Posted By Lorlie
Thank you QOW, life has been getting in the way...

Thank you QOW, life has been getting in the way of living of late, but hopefully I have that silly time thing sorted out to such a state that I get to have some of it for ME!!

Hey Josie,
Just...
Forum: Writing Markets 01-03-2008, 01:14 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 5,147
Posted By Lorlie
I enjoyed that little exchange, how I have missed...

I enjoyed that little exchange, how I have missed being here.
Nice to read you Lin.


Wecome



Lorlie
Forum: Board Games 11-11-2007, 09:20 AM
Replies: 86
Views: 9,926
Posted By Lorlie
Peter Parker. . . (Spiderman) Alice

Peter Parker. . . (Spiderman)


Alice
Forum: Inkster Incorporated 11-11-2007, 09:17 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,198
Posted By Lorlie
Where do I sign up for the badges and t-shirts? ...

Where do I sign up for the badges and t-shirts?

Lorlie
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