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Forum: Fiction 03-06-2018, 03:16 AM
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Posted By Rincewind
That first paragraph is just, no. You can...

That first paragraph is just, no.

You can write but you've posted far too much to read. Cut it and separate the paragraphs. Get rid of the first one though, imo.
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