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Forum: Fiction 02-18-2011, 04:17 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 780
Posted By Epictetus
Nice intro. Couple of SPaG mistakes. Very cool...

Nice intro. Couple of SPaG mistakes. Very cool though.
Forum: Fiction 01-28-2011, 07:55 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,587
Posted By Epictetus
Funny? Fleetingly. Clever? Cliche. ...

Funny?
Fleetingly.
Clever?
Cliche.

That is all.
Forum: Fiction 01-18-2011, 04:01 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,950
Posted By Epictetus
"Sounds delightful as well, Mr Ancient Greek...

"Sounds delightful as well, Mr Ancient Greek Philosopher xD
Thinking in images now evokes some kind of vision of a bearded man in a toga putting his fist in someones head and squeezing his brain,...
Forum: Fiction 01-13-2011, 04:43 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,950
Posted By Epictetus
Well I don't skin kittens. I crush people from...

Well I don't skin kittens.
I crush people from the inside out instead.
Forum: Fiction 01-10-2011, 07:39 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,950
Posted By Epictetus
To be worse than me, you would have to skin a...

To be worse than me, you would have to skin a kitten alive in front of a child...
Oh wait! You were talking writing-wise...
(Coughs)
Writing such a story isn't a bad thing. Unless you laughed...
Forum: Fiction 01-07-2011, 06:02 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,950
Posted By Epictetus
I took sadistic pleasure in reading this... ...

I took sadistic pleasure in reading this...
Does that make me a bad person?...
Forum: Fiction 01-02-2011, 08:10 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,814
Posted By Epictetus
Leber-Scribin' is short for subscribing. ...

Leber-Scribin' is short for subscribing.

Mick and Leber- I believe that most if not all Slavic languages lack articles. Polish is like this as well, thus leading me to asume that the rest are...
Forum: Fiction 01-02-2011, 01:53 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,637
Posted By Epictetus
Is the "three feet" part refering to distance...

Is the "three feet" part refering to distance dragged, or does she actually have three lower limbs that got severed and he is now dragging those limbs. From the way that sentance is worded, it seems...
Forum: Fiction 01-01-2011, 05:57 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,814
Posted By Epictetus
Scribin'

Scribin'
Forum: Poetry 01-01-2011, 02:08 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 789
Posted By Epictetus
I am quite partial to it myself.

I am quite partial to it myself.
Forum: Non-Fiction 01-01-2011, 02:38 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 3,375
Posted By Epictetus
Very

Very
Forum: Fiction 12-31-2010, 11:38 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,009
Posted By Epictetus
No, I don't believe that it is possible to...

No, I don't believe that it is possible to retitle. I think I tried to do so myself but couldn't. Methinks the admin can though...
Forum: Fiction 12-31-2010, 06:02 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,469
Posted By Epictetus
In retrospect I meant to point this out earlier,...

In retrospect I meant to point this out earlier, since I believe it could add a potential comedy element to the story. I usually find myself fantasizing about sex whilst in churches. You could throw...
Forum: Non-Fiction 12-31-2010, 05:30 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 3,375
Posted By Epictetus
First time in non-fiction section. Found this....

First time in non-fiction section.
Found this.
Was haps.
Cool story bro.
That is all.
Forum: Poetry 12-31-2010, 05:26 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 789
Posted By Epictetus
Another year over, a new one soon to be begun...

A New Year upon us is fast encroaching.
2010's good times and bad are now reproaching.
Now to write something that ends with an "ing"...
Point is, I don't write poetry, but Happy New Year to you...
Forum: Fiction 12-31-2010, 04:37 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,637
Posted By Epictetus
Very good critique Leber. There is one thing...

Very good critique Leber. There is one thing wrong with it. First line, you used the word "yo". If you did so unironically I will be terribly prejudiced against you...
Forum: Fiction 12-31-2010, 04:35 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,099
Posted By Epictetus
Perhaps her mother was Elven, thus explaining why...

Perhaps her mother was Elven, thus explaining why she has an Elvish sounding name.
Forum: Fiction 12-31-2010, 04:34 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,009
Posted By Epictetus
A subscription post is pretty much a post that...

A subscription post is pretty much a post that catalogues you as having posted in a thread. You do so when you don't have enough time to read over a story. Now the next time when someone else posts...
Forum: Fiction 12-31-2010, 10:54 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,099
Posted By Epictetus
I understand not why people have such a...

I understand not why people have such a fascination with WoW. Play Oblivion, feel better.
Forum: Fiction 12-30-2010, 10:54 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,009
Posted By Epictetus
Before I start reading this... I would hardly...

Before I start reading this...
I would hardly call upwards of 7000 words a short story.
Secondly, this is a subscription post.
Forum: Fiction 12-30-2010, 10:51 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 971
Posted By Epictetus
Cool prequel to the Zero story. That is all.

Cool prequel to the Zero story.
That is all.
Forum: Fiction 12-29-2010, 09:22 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,099
Posted By Epictetus
This was quite a good read. I like your style....

This was quite a good read. I like your style. Also anticipating the next installments.
Forum: Fiction 12-29-2010, 04:10 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,644
Posted By Epictetus
He's blind...

He's blind...
Forum: Fiction 12-29-2010, 10:09 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,644
Posted By Epictetus
This definately belongs in the fiction section...

This definately belongs in the fiction section Tux...
That doesn't mean Shelly can't post it in non-fic...
Forum: Fiction 12-29-2010, 10:06 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 683
Posted By Epictetus
Lester to me happens to be the 21 year old...

Lester to me happens to be the 21 year old brother of a guy I know...
That gash across his forehead hasn't really gone away since four years ago...
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