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Forum: Free Writing 06-17-2012, 06:59 AM
Replies: 4
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Posted By ProsperosCell
I see what you mean better now. Thanks for the...

I see what you mean better now. Thanks for the insight.
Forum: Free Writing 06-16-2012, 07:37 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 504
Posted By ProsperosCell
Thanks for the comment, but the usage does not...

Thanks for the comment, but the usage does not clash. This is written in stream of consciousness and the "you" is from the first person narrator to a single individual.
Forum: Poetry 06-16-2012, 12:08 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 272
Posted By ProsperosCell
Kenosis

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Forum: Free Writing 05-25-2012, 06:29 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 504
Posted By ProsperosCell
Friends

Bells ring away, calling back the experience of one playing in the grass. A leaf? No a bug. So many kids and who is he? The Queen orders him to halt. Defense. I'd rather kick balls. Legs are weak. ...
Forum: The Library 05-21-2012, 11:48 PM
Replies: 134
Views: 27,133
Posted By ProsperosCell
What do you think of Harold Bloom's evaluation on...

What do you think of Harold Bloom's evaluation on David Foster Wallace: "He can't write and he can't think"?

I admire both of them, but I really think there is something to that statement that...
Forum: Poetry 05-21-2012, 07:41 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 351
Posted By ProsperosCell
The Space Between Spaces

The sun frozen holds the moon's embrace
and the sky turns pink in intimacy
I feel the wind sigh in earnest relief
while I sit and ponder my growing grief

Will we return
To that past forgotten...
Forum: Poetry 05-19-2012, 08:22 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 497
Posted By ProsperosCell
I read through a few of your poems on your blog,...

I read through a few of your poems on your blog, after reading this one, and I wondered where the significance of some of your images come from. You use 10,000 very often, for example, which I just...
Forum: Free Writing 05-18-2012, 05:22 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 658
Posted By ProsperosCell
The romantic quality of the chosen words...

The romantic quality of the chosen words definitely lessens the "clinical feel", I don't think someone that can feel a loss so outstanding is actually all that numb.
Forum: Poetry 05-18-2012, 05:03 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 548
Posted By ProsperosCell
I liked the content a lot, but I felt like it...

I liked the content a lot, but I felt like it could use a bit more rhythm, at least between certain lines that seemed more related
Forum: Poetry 05-18-2012, 07:52 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 522
Posted By ProsperosCell
I made up "transpherication". it means what you...

I made up "transpherication". it means what you probably think it does. The rest of the words are real though!
Forum: Poetry 05-17-2012, 10:58 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 522
Posted By ProsperosCell
In Passions Ever Enfolding Transpherication

Gliding glaciers splitting hewing crashing merging sunset

My days you had so glazed over
with nectarous elation
the hours spent in phantasmal lechery have
rendered such destitute ebullition
...
Forum: Poetry 05-17-2012, 05:00 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,134
Posted By ProsperosCell
For me T.S. Eliot is the best example, his titles...

For me T.S. Eliot is the best example, his titles are almost as important as the poetry itself and set up the world in which it takes place. Hart Crane used very simple but revealing titles that...
Forum: Poetry 05-17-2012, 04:27 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,134
Posted By ProsperosCell
I am not familiar with "Born into this" but I was...

I am not familiar with "Born into this" but I was only speaking of his poetry that I've read. I don't know much about his other work or his life, so I'm sure there is something I am missing.

My...
Forum: Poetry 05-17-2012, 03:49 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,134
Posted By ProsperosCell
I always felt like Bukowski was really good at...

I always felt like Bukowski was really good at making titles and really bad at living them up.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-17-2012, 02:49 PM
Replies: 87
Views: 11,913
Posted By ProsperosCell
I don't think theorizing falls in the realm of...

I don't think theorizing falls in the realm of fact or fiction. He wrote a book on a theory, which he believes is correct. Now, I agree with you completely that it is definitely not fact. But I can...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-17-2012, 02:14 PM
Replies: 87
Views: 11,913
Posted By ProsperosCell
I don't think what you have is a "fact" either....

I don't think what you have is a "fact" either. You have a stretch of the imagination as well, except what you are imagining is a completely different series of contexts and assumptions. We have here...
Forum: Fiction 05-17-2012, 02:03 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 970
Posted By ProsperosCell
The writing in this is greatly improved over your...

The writing in this is greatly improved over your other work I've seen. I think its obvious where you succeed in this work. Where you fail however is to leave me affected by the story. To me this was...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-17-2012, 01:17 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,582
Posted By ProsperosCell
maybe I'll start a blog

maybe I'll start a blog
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-17-2012, 01:17 PM
Replies: 87
Views: 11,913
Posted By ProsperosCell
she is actually in a very different position in...

she is actually in a very different position in the painting than she is in the photograph, though I am sure he used the photo to refresh some of the details of his murder
Forum: The Library 05-17-2012, 02:50 AM
Replies: 95
Views: 14,267
Posted By ProsperosCell
For me the lyrics on the album Astral Weeks by...

For me the lyrics on the album Astral Weeks by Van Morrison and the lyrics on Disintegration by the Cure are the best in rock music. They use two very different methods of writing, but the emotional...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-16-2012, 11:39 PM
Replies: 87
Views: 11,913
Posted By ProsperosCell
You can actually find 3 puppies in it,...

You can actually find 3 puppies in it, Vincent/Jack would leave dogs inside the rooms of his victims.
Forum: Poetry 05-16-2012, 11:36 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 683
Posted By ProsperosCell
KBR makes an excellent point, so many poems are...

KBR makes an excellent point, so many poems are about revelations, they often overshadow the style and the imagery.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 05-16-2012, 11:05 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 650
Posted By ProsperosCell
Hmm, interesting. Sounds similar to the legend of...

Hmm, interesting. Sounds similar to the legend of Roger Bacon, the scientist from the 13th century who discovered the philosopher's stone and is reborn every 500 years. It seems like dealing with...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-16-2012, 07:12 PM
Replies: 87
Views: 11,913
Posted By ProsperosCell
I don't care if this is real or not, the painting...

I don't care if this is real or not, the painting is now far more disturbing to me regardless.
Forum: Poetry 05-16-2012, 07:21 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 508
Posted By ProsperosCell
The speaker is passively awaiting the contact,...

The speaker is passively awaiting the contact, questioning whether he wishes to lose himself in it. in the end after contemplating possible futures, he decides that he'd rather be alone and scorns...
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