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Forum: Writing Help & Issues 03-24-2018, 11:02 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,994
Posted By DwayneA
I've been thinking about the secondary hero, if...

I've been thinking about the secondary hero, if he's struggling with having to live in the shadow of his great grandparents and struggling to make something of himself, maybe he shouldn't be engaged...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-21-2018, 12:13 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,994
Posted By DwayneA
another idea, the secondary heroine is later...

another idea, the secondary heroine is later revealed to be the protagonist's half-sister.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-20-2018, 07:05 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,994
Posted By DwayneA
Need Ideas For Developing These Characters

Before I can start on the story, I need to figure out how I am going to develop certain characters. I also know how to develop my protagonist, primary heroine, and the antagonist. Now I have a...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-20-2018, 09:10 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,124
Posted By DwayneA
the protagonist is nowhere near when the dark...

the protagonist is nowhere near when the dark wizard is released. He's not even on the same world when it happens as he doesn't live there. I'm thinking that it happens several years before the...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-15-2018, 01:06 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,725
Posted By DwayneA
this guy will probably one of the most complex...

this guy will probably one of the most complex characters in the story because of his character arc. At the start of the story, he starts off as a friend of the protagonist, joins up with the...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-15-2018, 12:49 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,222
Posted By DwayneA
I've also been thinking about his family. I had a...

I've also been thinking about his family. I had a recent idea that his father is actually a person from this alternate world, meaning that his paternal family is in the alternate world. From what I...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-15-2018, 07:24 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,124
Posted By DwayneA
How Should I Start My Story?

I'm trying to figure out where is the best place to start my young adult fantasy story which is part 3 for this game mod I'm working on. My protagonist is a former police officer dismissed from the...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-15-2018, 07:14 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,222
Posted By DwayneA
I've been thinking that I need to change some of...

I've been thinking that I need to change some of the ideas above to make them fit. He'll still be a nyctophobic, still dreams of being an actual detective, and how he got his fear of the dark. But...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 11-19-2017, 03:13 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,434
Posted By DwayneA
still sounds confusing to me

still sounds confusing to me
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 11-19-2017, 01:59 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,434
Posted By DwayneA
What Makes A Plot Strong?

I have read online concensus' for various films on Rottentomatoes and certain game reviews on gamespot about them having a thin plot. Exactly what is meant by a thin plot? What's the difference...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 08-29-2017, 01:33 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,586
Posted By DwayneA
Author Laziness

I frequently hear in reviewer comments about "laziness on behalf of the author" and how the story could have been much better if the author had done more work. Recently, I finished reading the entire...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-30-2017, 10:07 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,222
Posted By DwayneA
I've been thinking of ideas of how his...

I've been thinking of ideas of how his nyctophobia could have gotten the best of him, destroying both his career and his reputation. So far the only idea I've gotten is that the moment occurs during...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-16-2017, 10:22 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,725
Posted By DwayneA
Um, what the heck does that mean?

Um, what the heck does that mean?
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-16-2017, 08:19 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,725
Posted By DwayneA
I've actually had dreams of some of the scenes he...

I've actually had dreams of some of the scenes he is in, particularily his death scene.

You know you're a tragic villain when the ghosts of your parents actually join forces with the hero to stop...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-13-2017, 08:46 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,725
Posted By DwayneA
I'm just sharing some of my ideas and was looking...

I'm just sharing some of my ideas and was looking for some feedback on if they sound good and fit the character I want to create.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-13-2017, 07:54 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,725
Posted By DwayneA
Actually, the villain I had in mind had these...

Actually, the villain I had in mind had these traits:

-He's the most feared wizard to have ever existed in the realm. He was born the son of a sorceress and a pure-blood human astronomer. His...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-12-2017, 09:03 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,725
Posted By DwayneA
Tragic Villain

In my opinion this is the only kind of villainous antagonist that the reader can sympathize with. The villain of the story I plan to write to complete the trilogy of mod for the game I'm working on...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-13-2017, 04:03 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,788
Posted By DwayneA
right now I don't have any work to show. I only...

right now I don't have any work to show. I only have ideas for this character. What I'm asking for are suggestions or comments on how it looks so far.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-12-2017, 05:43 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,788
Posted By DwayneA
no I don't drink coffee? Why?

no I don't drink coffee? Why?
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-12-2017, 09:03 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,788
Posted By DwayneA
Ideas For My Lead Female

I've already discussed some ideas for the protagonist of the story I am planning for the third and final part in a trilogy for a game mod that I will write a trilogy of books based on after it is...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-09-2017, 06:51 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,222
Posted By DwayneA
I haven't even started the writing yet. First I...

I haven't even started the writing yet. First I need to put together ideas for the characters and the plot to develop them before I can start writing.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-09-2017, 04:08 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,222
Posted By DwayneA
so far, it's what I've got planned. I'm asking...

so far, it's what I've got planned. I'm asking for your opinion how it all looks so far.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-09-2017, 01:53 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,222
Posted By DwayneA
that's just part of his ultimate character...

that's just part of his ultimate character growth. In the end, with help from his friends, lover, and mentor, he saves both worlds and the human race, confronting his greatest fear in the process and...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-08-2017, 01:22 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,222
Posted By DwayneA
Oh right, I almost forgot. He starts off feeling...

Oh right, I almost forgot. He starts off feeling that he has no purpose with nothing left to live for. But as the story progresses, he slowly through the friendships he develops, the role he plays in...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-08-2017, 11:24 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,222
Posted By DwayneA
Ideas For My Protagonist

I've finished writing the story for part 2 in the trilogy I am planning for a game. I'll soon be starting the third and final part. In the future, I'll be writing a trilogy of books based on the mod....
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