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Forum: Scripts 11-20-2013, 08:56 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 10,584
Posted By mai88
because his father is old, not that attractive,...

because his father is old, not that attractive, and not rich, and also kind of normal
Forum: Fiction 11-04-2013, 01:13 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,764
Posted By mai88
Icon5 Can you please point out the sentences/parts...

Can you please point out the sentences/parts where you felt I got off track?
Forum: Fiction 11-04-2013, 04:02 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,764
Posted By mai88
Icon7 Thank you. I admit that I'm still having troubles...

Thank you. I admit that I'm still having troubles in how to write dialogues within a story, my problem is not with the dialogue itself but how to fit it in the story, do you have any advice on the...
Forum: Fiction 11-04-2013, 04:00 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,764
Posted By mai88
Icon5 first of all, thank you, and second of all, if...

first of all, thank you, and second of all, if it's not too much to ask; can you please tell me more about the areas for improvement? be a little specific.
I would really appreciate it
Forum: Fiction 11-03-2013, 12:07 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,764
Posted By mai88
Icon5 feedback needed-second attempt on short story

I didn't give up yet, I wrote a new short story, I think it's better than the first one, but then; what do I know! I need your feedback and advice so I can improve, please give me all the advice you...
Forum: Tips & Advice 11-03-2013, 03:31 AM
Replies: 71
Views: 7,532
Posted By mai88
I think it's harder to find names when you're...

I think it's harder to find names when you're writing fantasy or
science fiction. I personally have never had trouble with finding names. but it's good to know my options
Forum: Introductions 11-03-2013, 01:23 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 653
Posted By mai88
I'm new here as well, but it's a welcoming...

I'm new here as well, but it's a welcoming environment.
welcome to the forum, and good luck in finding what you're looking for.
Forum: Introductions 11-02-2013, 01:53 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 954
Posted By mai88
Icon7 I'm fine, hi to you too.

I'm fine, hi to you too.
Forum: Fiction 11-01-2013, 09:09 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 865
Posted By mai88
I love how the story flow, I kept reading it...

I love how the story flow, I kept reading it without a pause.
I didn't know that the main character is a girl until the last paragraphs, I don't know why, maybe it's just stupid of me not to know.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 10-31-2013, 12:37 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,652
Posted By mai88
Icon5 if I am to stick with one tense, say past tense...

if I am to stick with one tense, say past tense for example, throughout a whole novel would that be wrong, or is it acceptable?
Forum: Fiction 10-30-2013, 11:56 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,732
Posted By mai88
in "The Corpse" what's the mark?

in "The Corpse" what's the mark?
Forum: Scripts 10-30-2013, 07:27 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 4,836
Posted By mai88
Icon5 dialogue from "dog p**p and bird p**p"

this is from a sitcom I was writing along time ago, anyone would like to give me advice?

Maggie takes out a bitten apple from the almost empty fridge: why do we have a half-eaten apple in the...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 10-30-2013, 06:09 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,055
Posted By mai88
why don't you read what you wrote again and try...

why don't you read what you wrote again and try to edit it or change things in it, maybe it'll put your brain in a go mode, and you'll finish the work.
but this is only my modest opinion.
Forum: Free Writing 10-29-2013, 12:57 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,581
Posted By mai88
I'm also better at telling stories than actually...

I'm also better at telling stories than actually writing them, that's a difficulty for me, I have so many great ideas, ones that no one could think of, but a writer with better execution skills, even...
Forum: Fiction 10-29-2013, 10:15 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 3,426
Posted By mai88
Icon14 where can I find your work? do you have a famous...

where can I find your work? do you have a famous work? I'd love to read some of what you wrote (or write). you sound like a wise writer
Forum: Fiction 10-29-2013, 02:08 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 3,426
Posted By mai88
well, I did read about the writers digest...

well, I did read about the writers digest contest, and along with a friend we wanted to challenge ourselves, I mean how do you write a full story in 1500 words, I'm not that good to participate in...
Forum: Fiction 10-28-2013, 10:00 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 3,426
Posted By mai88
Icon6 no, why? is it that obvious?

no, why? is it that obvious?
Forum: Fiction 10-28-2013, 07:41 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 3,426
Posted By mai88
I'm one of those writers who believe that...

I'm one of those writers who believe that everything I write is magic. I'm sure there are many writers like that, it's like when a mother refuses to see the bad side of her child while everyone else...
Forum: Fiction 10-28-2013, 06:00 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 3,426
Posted By mai88
Icon11 so, it's an epic fail, I thank you all for your...

so, it's an epic fail, I thank you all for your honesty, although I'm a little sad:(:(
but isn't there even the smallest positive thing about it?
I do respect your opinions, and no this is not a...
Forum: Fiction 10-26-2013, 04:22 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 3,426
Posted By mai88
Icon5 feedback needed-first attempt on a short story

so, I was asked to write a short story, but I know nothing about short stories, I'm asking you please to read my story and give feedback, I'll take any feedback, because I'm trying to write the final...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 10-25-2013, 05:22 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,652
Posted By mai88
like for example in this paragraph, where did I...

like for example in this paragraph, where did I go wrong with tenses;
Ever since she was a little girl, Madeline has the ability to see people’s most painful memories with a simple touch. This...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 10-24-2013, 06:01 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,652
Posted By mai88
Icon5 tenses drive me crazy

Since English is my second language, I can't find my way around tenses use in creative writing. should I write with simple present only or simple past only, or use both, or bring in the perfect...
Forum: Free Writing 10-22-2013, 11:42 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,581
Posted By mai88
Thank you all for replying. I always believed...

Thank you all for replying. I always believed that the story is more important than how you tell it. after reading your replies I might reconsider that belief, maybe the execution is the key, or at...
Forum: Free Writing 10-22-2013, 03:07 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,581
Posted By mai88
Icon5 help me decide if am wasting my time on this

I came up with a story about immortal witches, can you please read the following description and tell me if I should drop it or move on with developing it.
the story is about a teenager (Melissa),...
Forum: Free Writing 10-22-2013, 01:57 AM
Replies: 56
Views: 8,464
Posted By mai88
free flow. because when I plan it I can't write it

free flow. because when I plan it I can't write it
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