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Forum: Classifieds 02-04-2009, 11:29 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 3,183
Posted By Ungood
Thanks for the link. Was a good site to check out.

Thanks for the link. Was a good site to check out.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-04-2009, 10:20 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,864
Posted By Ungood
Here is a link to the US Copyright Office...

Here is a link to the US Copyright Office (http://www.copyright.gov/). Their FAQ (http://www.copyright.gov/help/faq/) is quite helpful.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-04-2009, 10:11 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,568
Posted By Ungood
As far as I know (But this does not count as...

As far as I know (But this does not count as legal advice, as I am not a lawyer) copyright only protects works that are "fixed in a tangible form of expression"

So if the mouse is only telling you...
Forum: Tips & Advice 01-29-2009, 01:53 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 6,690
Posted By Ungood
It was a joke about the mutability of words. As I...

It was a joke about the mutability of words. As I said, it was not that funny so don't over think it.

But now it seems, with that post, that this discussion has run it course.

It has been...
Forum: Tips & Advice 01-29-2009, 12:45 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 6,690
Posted By Ungood
Well, clear communication is a burden we all...

Well, clear communication is a burden we all share. All of us. We can't always just expect that someone will "get" what we mean as we meant it.

So in that spirit, I am wondering what other ways...
Forum: Tips & Advice 01-29-2009, 09:13 AM
Replies: 66
Views: 6,690
Posted By Ungood
Myself, from the first post.

Myself, from the first post.
Forum: Tips & Advice 01-29-2009, 09:12 AM
Replies: 66
Views: 6,690
Posted By Ungood
I see the point you are trying to make now....

I see the point you are trying to make now. HoiLei

My confusion came because it seemed very circular when you first brought it to light. It was that which is what created some serious issues for...
Forum: Tips & Advice 01-29-2009, 08:44 AM
Replies: 66
Views: 6,690
Posted By Ungood
Fair enough. As if we agreed upon everything,...

Fair enough. As if we agreed upon everything, there would be nothing to discuss.

And I embrace the fact that you disagree with me, so with that can you help me out here a moment?

And explain...
Forum: Tips & Advice 01-29-2009, 08:15 AM
Replies: 66
Views: 6,690
Posted By Ungood
I sincerely wish I could help you. It...

I sincerely wish I could help you.

It appears that everyone is saying that they disagree with me, yet the body and point of their posts is in agreement with me. Like a game where they believe...
Forum: Tips & Advice 01-29-2009, 08:01 AM
Replies: 66
Views: 6,690
Posted By Ungood
Well that is my point: That we only have what...

Well that is my point: That we only have what someone actually says.

And yet, everyone shows up and tells me I am wrong, care to explain to me why that is?

Thank you! Very Good! That...
Forum: Scripts 01-29-2009, 05:16 AM
Replies: 112
Views: 11,162
Posted By Ungood
This would be a great flash fiction or short...

This would be a great flash fiction or short story, where you don't need to get into long details. You don't need more 'body' then you have already provided if you keep this simple and sweet.

Good...
Forum: Tips & Advice 01-29-2009, 04:49 AM
Replies: 66
Views: 6,690
Posted By Ungood
Thank you for bringing this up. Allow me...

Thank you for bringing this up.

Allow me to explain how that works and how that can unfold because this is a great example of lack of information being played upon the situation.

This is a...
Forum: Tips & Advice 01-29-2009, 03:49 AM
Replies: 66
Views: 6,690
Posted By Ungood
Yah, we American's are funny like that. Not to...

Yah, we American's are funny like that. Not to mention local customs and you have a whole barrage of fun cultural issues.

I enjoyed the rest of your post and it made some fun and good points. Good...
Forum: Fiction 01-29-2009, 03:39 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 715
Posted By Ungood
The relationship feels a bit out of place and...

The relationship feels a bit out of place and there are several times when I am having a hard time following what is trying to be said here.

Other then that, this is a really sweet bit of writing,...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 01-28-2009, 05:53 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 3,072
Posted By Ungood
I laughed myself silly! This was priceless!

I laughed myself silly! This was priceless!
Forum: Fiction 01-28-2009, 05:37 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 3,082
Posted By Ungood
I the whole thing, but I did not want to quote...

I the whole thing, but I did not want to quote the whole thing. I only made a comment in the start so I quoted that.



My only advice to all your questions is write the story you would want to...
Forum: Tips & Advice 01-28-2009, 04:46 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 6,690
Posted By Ungood
This was a wonderful post. Great points. ...

This was a wonderful post. Great points.
Perhaps we can discuss this a bit then.


As it stands that seems to be a cultural clash. I'll leave it that.



You are for the most part...
Forum: Fiction 01-28-2009, 05:13 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,786
Posted By Ungood
Good work overall. I like the realism of the...

Good work overall. I like the realism of the situation. One bit however.



These two parts do not jive with each other.

All in all, the others have given you some great advice, nothing more I...
Forum: Fiction 01-28-2009, 04:58 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 3,082
Posted By Ungood
[/CENTER] It is good, but it feels rather...

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It is good, but it feels rather static to me. It might be what you are trying for however. A slow mellow almost non-moving scene.

You tend to keep this slow motion going as you work...
Forum: Tips & Advice 01-27-2009, 04:28 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 6,690
Posted By Ungood
Great Post! Loved this one. I enjoyed what...

Great Post!

Loved this one. I enjoyed what you said about brain activity, it was not 'dutch' at all. Just want you to know that your words are not being missed.

I want to say that your example...
Forum: Tips & Advice 01-27-2009, 10:07 AM
Replies: 66
Views: 6,690
Posted By Ungood
Yes, I have to say this is a very good point. ...

Yes, I have to say this is a very good point.

Great aspect of intention and how words can covey that. I liked this one.

I also rather enjoyed the example you used as well.

This is a good...
Forum: Tips & Advice 01-27-2009, 07:48 AM
Replies: 66
Views: 6,690
Posted By Ungood
Sorry this took so long HoiLei - you had a very good post!

Not really, because then you can be “Saying” what you never said, which is a VERY dangerous place to be, I think we all can attest to that. :: Wink ::

Allow me to explain.

Your first...
Forum: Tips & Advice 01-27-2009, 06:46 AM
Replies: 66
Views: 6,690
Posted By Ungood
I laughed. This was a very good point, and well...

I laughed. This was a very good point, and well noted.

Setting would take a role here, as I suppose during a fight between two people, most notably a man and a woman, and the mans said in a fit...
Forum: Tips & Advice 01-27-2009, 06:08 AM
Replies: 66
Views: 6,690
Posted By Ungood
Now it seems you are having some difficulty here,...

Now it seems you are having some difficulty here, so let me explain this to you, this is what is called a discussion, not a debate or an insult contest.

Now if you have some gem of wisdom you...
Forum: Classifieds 01-26-2009, 06:33 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,233
Posted By Ungood
Sounds like Vanity Press as it seemed that the...

Sounds like Vanity Press as it seemed that the cost to get published was $300.

That's how I saw it at least. But all good questions by everyone else.
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