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Forum: Poetry Yesterday, 05:02 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,268
Posted By Luciaphile
This is something I think about often. I get...

This is something I think about often. I get very sad about how a human being (like my husband) lived 65 years of thoughts, details, feelings, memories, many many deep unusual ideas, so many never...
Forum: Poetry Yesterday, 04:50 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 813
Posted By Luciaphile
Good one! I had a wonderful idea, though, for...

Good one! I had a wonderful idea, though, for the end, something like Extinction of animals ended, cruelty towards women, children, and animals non-existent, and no-kill humane societies the law of...
Forum: Poetry Yesterday, 03:03 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,925
Posted By Luciaphile
The use of the word buggery is pretty awful -...

The use of the word buggery is pretty awful - paints an ugly picture of someone I'd want to respect - you? I'm talking about your readers, not your terrorists. No, I'm not gay, but I'm sensitive.
Forum: Non-Fiction Yesterday, 06:31 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 620
Posted By Luciaphile
A thoughtful piece on the questions that come...

A thoughtful piece on the questions that come into many minds about religion. I struggled like you for a long while, and then suddenly, after a cancer death in the family, I realized I did not...
Forum: Poetry Yesterday, 03:40 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,925
Posted By Luciaphile
Are you talkin' ta me? I said, Are you talkin'...

Are you talkin' ta me? I said, Are you talkin' ta me? 'Cause if you are, if you can't take a dare, don't throw it back on me.

My search results:
The following errors occurred with your...
Forum: Poetry 02-22-2018, 12:38 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 175
Posted By Luciaphile
Great poem! I like the movement in it juxtaposed...

Great poem! I like the movement in it juxtaposed against the stillness of the dog. I like that he/she forgot the ball, though in my experience with my dogs they don't forget. One of my dogs still...
Forum: Fiction 02-19-2018, 02:07 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 309
Posted By Luciaphile
'Oh, I'll get along fine!' she said...

'Oh, I'll get along fine!' she said sarcastically. "All I care about is the trip to Europe. Yeah, right...."

Maybe?

I think, too, that you are losing a reader's concern for this character...
Forum: The Library 02-15-2018, 03:40 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 433
Posted By Luciaphile
When a teen, we had to read MacBeth, which set...

When a teen, we had to read MacBeth, which set off a big fad with my friends and me of witches and medieval times, helped along by the movie Camelot, too. This was my favorite poem:

William...
Forum: The Library 02-15-2018, 03:32 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 433
Posted By Luciaphile
The Lake Isle of Innisfree BY WILLIAM BUTLER...

The Lake Isle of Innisfree
BY WILLIAM BUTLER YEATS

I will arise and go now, and go to Innisfree,
And a small cabin build there, of clay and wattles made;
Nine bean-rows will I have there, a...
Forum: Fiction 02-15-2018, 03:24 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 445
Posted By Luciaphile
Yeah, it hooks me, and I want to know what...

Yeah, it hooks me, and I want to know what happened to her mother. But all the bullying is so maddening. Does it all have to be about bullying these days? I was bullied myself, nerdy wimp that I...
Forum: Lyrics 02-15-2018, 08:04 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 210
Posted By Luciaphile
Nice! Just a thought - the word coming in last...

Nice! Just a thought - the word coming in last stanza could be replaced with a more active or attractive word, flowing, splashing, etc.
Forum: Free Writing 02-13-2018, 02:26 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 131
Posted By Luciaphile
I think as if I were is correct, rather than as...

I think as if I were is correct, rather than as if I was. To me were sounds better. I used to be a person who corrected grammar papers, but I've forgotten a lot of rules. Here is what Google said:...
Forum: Poetry 02-13-2018, 10:02 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,925
Posted By Luciaphile
I dare you to write the opposite of this poem.

I dare you to write the opposite of this poem.
Forum: Poetry 02-06-2018, 05:18 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 335
Posted By Luciaphile
Car accident? Blood staining the front window? A...

Car accident? Blood staining the front window? A metaphor for what we perceive as reality is bound to deceive us eventually?
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-01-2018, 02:53 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 916
Posted By Luciaphile
I often have those thoughts - how great to have a...

I often have those thoughts - how great to have a toilet, electricity, a house, everything I have, so much compared to all those who don't have one or more of these devices. Yet I suffer chronic...
Forum: Fiction 02-01-2018, 12:47 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 591
Posted By Luciaphile
sounds like the beginning of a crime or mystery...

sounds like the beginning of a crime or mystery novel that I might read if it keeps being as sharp.
Forum: Fiction 02-01-2018, 12:39 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 842
Posted By Luciaphile
I read it. I laughed. I'm waiting for more. I...

I read it. I laughed. I'm waiting for more. I sure hope he can save the world.
Forum: Fiction 02-01-2018, 12:31 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 251
Posted By Luciaphile
This is very good! What happens next? Though I...

This is very good! What happens next? Though I immediately thought of Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, I really wanted to keep reading. I'm glad you turned from telling us what happened first to...
Forum: Poetry 02-01-2018, 08:36 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 190
Posted By Luciaphile
Nice, except the line up up and away. That's a...

Nice, except the line up up and away. That's a song from the 70s. I think the poem reads just as well without that line, but I guess you need a rhyme. I think the meter is funny, though, but I'm...
Forum: Members' Feedback 02-01-2018, 08:24 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 849
Posted By Luciaphile
Lockette, did you write that lonely poem? My, it...

Lockette, did you write that lonely poem? My, it is sure good.
Forum: Fiction 02-01-2018, 08:19 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 617
Posted By Luciaphile
Thanks for the encouragement, spshane and...

Thanks for the encouragement, spshane and BrianPatrick, that means a lot. Sorry, Nick, maybe it won't be a secret after all -
Forum: Fiction 01-31-2018, 07:18 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 617
Posted By Luciaphile
Beesauce, and I loved your name, too. Oh, well,...

Beesauce, and I loved your name, too. Oh, well, no I am not a pedophile, but I was the victim of one from toddler through first grade, and it is one of the threads in my books, as I try to live a...
Forum: Fiction 01-31-2018, 10:19 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 303
Posted By Luciaphile
Beesauce, it is pretty funny, and based on my...

Beesauce, it is pretty funny, and based on my Grandmother's stories of the past.
Forum: Fiction 01-29-2018, 11:59 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 584
Posted By Luciaphile
Oh, you are so very welcome...

Oh, you are so very welcome...
Forum: Fiction 01-29-2018, 01:17 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 617
Posted By Luciaphile
Well, BrianPAtrick, I looked up the book you...

Well, BrianPAtrick, I looked up the book you mentioned, but it is the one book of his they don't have at my library. I'll look for it elsewhere. But anyway, this is from a review of one of his...
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