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Forum: Writers' Cafe 04-13-2015, 04:56 PM
Replies: 268
Views: 16,536
Posted By Michael D
No, it's "Crap or get out of the kitchen". Wait,...

No, it's "Crap or get out of the kitchen". Wait, that's wrong.
Maybe, "If you can't take the heat, get off the toilet."
Okay maybe that's not right either. I'm sure it was something like that.

M
Forum: Writing Markets 03-27-2015, 06:03 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,298
Posted By Michael D
Define naughty.

Define naughty.
Forum: Board Games 03-24-2015, 04:19 PM
Replies: 9,470
Views: 210,914
Posted By Michael D
and makes millions

and makes millions
Forum: Fiction 03-20-2015, 04:35 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,115
Posted By Michael D
Struggled getting into it for a bit, however, the...

Struggled getting into it for a bit, however, the tension was obvious right away -- the weighing of words and frustration. All tipping the scale toward the fuck this shit mark. Yeah, I can feel ya on...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-20-2015, 08:44 AM
Replies: 65
Views: 7,341
Posted By Michael D
You heard it here first, folks.

You heard it here first, folks.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-19-2015, 12:13 PM
Replies: 65
Views: 7,341
Posted By Michael D
I'd like to see a schoolgirl THROW a 92 mph...

I'd like to see a schoolgirl THROW a 92 mph fastball.
Forum: Fiction 03-19-2015, 12:11 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,977
Posted By Michael D
“Why’s Covington so dead? Did they build a...

“Why’s Covington so dead? Did they build a Walmart or something?” Classic.
This is sharp and funny. Better with the few changes. Well done!

M
Forum: Fiction 03-19-2015, 11:57 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,223
Posted By Michael D
Spotted that and cringed. Aside from this formula...

Spotted that and cringed. Aside from this formula being a bit long of tooth, you can still get away with it if it's done smartly. To me, this one has no real hook to it. Yes, lose the...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-18-2015, 08:31 AM
Replies: 52
Views: 6,513
Posted By Michael D
My demon of speed wouldn't smell like any...

My demon of speed wouldn't smell like any stimulant; it would reek of Ferrari.
Forum: Writing Markets 03-15-2015, 02:16 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,298
Posted By Michael D
Touche' NS. You could have added: and heroin-esk...

Touche' NS. You could have added: and heroin-esk frames.

Heroin-esk. Is that correct?

M
Forum: Fiction 03-15-2015, 02:13 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,274
Posted By Michael D
What daes said, and yeah -- she creeped me out as...

What daes said, and yeah -- she creeped me out as well. Reminded me of Let Me In. Really liked the ambiguous ending. I hate having everything handed to me on a plate.

M
Forum: Writing Markets 03-14-2015, 06:27 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,298
Posted By Michael D
You mean... it's not?

You mean... it's not?
Forum: Board Games 03-14-2015, 02:50 PM
Replies: 9,470
Views: 210,914
Posted By Michael D
Monkey has talent.

Monkey has talent.
Forum: Fiction 03-14-2015, 02:48 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,447
Posted By Michael D
Was he supposed to be likable?

Was he supposed to be likable?
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-11-2015, 05:14 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,522
Posted By Michael D
Absurd. I assure you, some of the most horribly...

Absurd. I assure you, some of the most horribly effective military operatives are "quiet by nature." Don't let anyone tell you that quiet always equals timid.

M
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-09-2015, 01:28 PM
Replies: 65
Views: 7,341
Posted By Michael D
I was once diagnosed with auxiliary verb. Had it...

I was once diagnosed with auxiliary verb. Had it cast out by a shaman.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-09-2015, 08:19 AM
Replies: 65
Views: 7,341
Posted By Michael D
Nacia - don't poke the bear.

Nacia - don't poke the bear.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-06-2015, 02:06 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 6,513
Posted By Michael D
My ex wife.

My ex wife.
Forum: Fiction 03-05-2015, 12:09 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,447
Posted By Michael D
Changes? Pffft. You don need no stinkin changes....

Changes? Pffft. You don need no stinkin changes. The only "maybe, could be, well... I don't know" that I spotted is:

There's no doctor in the house. Only spectators. Shoveling processed meats...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 03-04-2015, 09:13 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 2,245
Posted By Michael D
Longknife - perhaps another example or two of...

Longknife - perhaps another example or two of what you are struggling with?


M
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-04-2015, 09:05 AM
Replies: 65
Views: 7,341
Posted By Michael D
Flea - I wonder what your record is for...

Flea -

I wonder what your record is for longest statement without a period. :p

Mike C - after reading your post, this came to mind: “There's no one thing that's true. It's all true.”
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-17-2015, 07:45 AM
Replies: 45
Views: 3,160
Posted By Michael D
Very nice work, Ken. You are talented and your...

Very nice work, Ken. You are talented and your work has a distinguishable trademark look about it. Well done!

M
Forum: Fiction 02-17-2015, 05:34 AM
Replies: 37
Views: 4,245
Posted By Michael D
sdenyer - Okay, I suppose this is a bit "about...

sdenyer -
Okay, I suppose this is a bit "about me."
My above last two comments were concerning the advice you presented which was basically, "use no imagination when writing - write only what you...
Forum: Fiction 02-16-2015, 04:56 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 4,245
Posted By Michael D
2-6-2015 "Dear Michael - My thanks for your...

2-6-2015
"Dear Michael -
My thanks for your note. Glad that you enjoyed The Saint. Gaunt is also one of my favorite characters. Not at all odd that it took so very long for you to begin." (to read...
Forum: Fiction 02-16-2015, 04:12 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 4,245
Posted By Michael D
sdenyer - I added explanatory comments due...

sdenyer -

I added explanatory comments due to your tendency to go over the edge with your paranoid ramblings. In all honesty, I sometimes find it difficult to discern whether you are offering...
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