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Forum: Non-Fiction 08-17-2018, 08:35 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 550
Posted By Vince
I'm greatful for Salmon. Although, I hear they...

I'm greatful for Salmon. Although, I hear they are not greatful for me.
Forum: Fiction 08-17-2018, 08:31 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 104
Posted By Vince
Wrinkles

Kim looked in the mirror and thought, Is that a wrinkle? Iím too young for a wrinkle. She frowned and thought, Doing this might cause wrinkles.


ďOh well, I donít mind getting a wrinkle as...
Forum: Free Writing 08-15-2018, 08:57 AM
Replies: 6
Old
Views: 292
Posted By Vince
HI Box, Very glad you liked it. Men cryall the...

HI Box,
Very glad you liked it. Men cryall the time - its just on the inside. Hot? Hmmm Ithink I am tearing up right now. Nope just tired eyes.
Forum: Free Writing 08-02-2018, 10:51 AM
Replies: 6
Old
Views: 292
Posted By Vince
Thanks for reading and suggestions daes13. it...

Thanks for reading and suggestions daes13. it was just free writtingbut I think I'll give it more time. Not sure what you mean by Eitger speech tag or action
Forum: Free Writing 08-02-2018, 10:48 AM
Replies: 6
Old
Views: 292
Posted By Vince
thnks Nick glad you got it. it takes an SOB to...

thnks Nick glad you got it. it takes an SOB to know one and we can share nice
Forum: Free Writing 08-01-2018, 12:06 PM
Replies: 6
Old
Views: 292
Posted By Vince
Old

ďYou know, getting old isnít hard all you have to do is wait. You donít even have to pay attention. It just happens.Ē Jim said to Mack as they were sitting on the exercise machines in the Rec....
Forum: Poetry 07-29-2018, 11:21 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 156
Posted By Vince
Inept

Inept

Pity the inept, who live in futility.
Doomed to foolish unending hostility.

They strut and shout assigning fault.
Convincing a few, the rest still doubt.

...
Forum: Poetry 07-03-2018, 11:41 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 438
Posted By Vince
sounds like someone knows how to whistle

sounds like someone knows how to whistle
Forum: Poetry 07-03-2018, 01:01 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 438
Posted By Vince
Grace, Kathy read it and had some changes to...

Grace,
Kathy read it and had some changes to ofter as well - I will work on it. Areadymade some changes to the post .



the dead bee remark was a referanceto the movie "to have and have not"...
Forum: Poetry 07-02-2018, 06:42 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 438
Posted By Vince
Grace Gabriel, thanks for your help. I wrote...

Grace Gabriel,
thanks for your help. I wrote this for a young couple getting married soon. Been married three times. This time for 40 years. I finally learned.


Glad you liked it.


by the...
Forum: Poetry 07-02-2018, 11:52 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 438
Posted By Vince
Metamorphosis

Drawn together by their deep yearning for wholeness,
Each has pieces the other is missing from their souls,
The puzzle begun with romance, completed by marriage

Not an event but a rich...
Forum: Poetry 06-25-2018, 12:28 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 303
Posted By Vince
Thanks for the encouragement spshane and Ms. Box...

Thanks for the encouragement spshane and Ms. Box made some changes what do you think?
Forum: Poetry 06-21-2018, 11:08 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 303
Posted By Vince
yonathan1 indeed. this was an experiment...

yonathan1


indeed. this was an experiment that failed will try again.
Forum: Poetry 06-20-2018, 12:26 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 303
Posted By Vince
Dragonfly

Driven it climbs out of a wet world
A water creature seeking a dry end
Gasping it’s body forms a hard shell

But this is not death. This is definition
Without mind life is made...
Forum: Poetry 06-09-2018, 11:08 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 288
Posted By Vince
Like this. some of the referances are too modern...

Like this. some of the referances are too modern for an old goat like me but I like the thinking . Love is elusive and when you have it you can't hold it in place.
Forum: Poetry 06-08-2018, 06:33 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 669
Posted By Vince
thanks Vonathan1 - often most men become that...

thanks Vonathan1 - often most men become that lion. look forward to reading your stuff.
Forum: Poetry 05-30-2018, 11:25 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 669
Posted By Vince
Thanks box. even old lions still have their bite...

Thanks box. even old lions still have their bite and dignity. They still feel relevant and only become silly and pathetic when they try to be young again. Age is complicated.
Forum: Poetry 05-27-2018, 07:47 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 669
Posted By Vince
thanks Nick

thanks Nick
Forum: Poetry 05-27-2018, 07:46 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 669
Posted By Vince
the thoughts of an old man, Nacia

the thoughts of an old man, Nacia
Forum: Free Writing 05-19-2018, 10:28 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,468
Posted By Vince
the proff that souo exists is easy - two words -...

the proff that souo exists is easy - two words - James Brown - he is gone but soul lives on
Forum: Poetry 05-19-2018, 05:48 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 669
Posted By Vince
Ancient Lion

The old lion’s blood still burns bright,
hot as the youngest stalking male’s.

Remembered conflicts no less real,
though behind memory’s closing door.

His pride now, is a feeling not a...
Forum: Poetry 05-15-2018, 12:20 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 567
Posted By Vince
Which Real

Age sees though most of lifeís most solid givens.
Is it unseemly to notice that animal nature rules?
Not long out of the jungle, humane rules are riven.

Contemplating humanity brings no peace of...
Forum: Poetry 05-14-2018, 07:31 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 620
Posted By Vince
Thriving mentally - I think. life changes when...

Thriving mentally - I think. life changes when you are old. Not all bad but clearly different.
Forum: Free Writing 05-14-2018, 07:28 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,184
Posted By Vince
I wish I were you"... as he would say

I wish I were you"... as he would say
Forum: Poetry 05-14-2018, 07:22 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 508
Posted By Vince
Somehow bliss has become some kind of right to be...

Somehow bliss has become some kind of right to be had by all or life is wrong because of its absence. It seems that thinking feeling people can't find it or hold it; only talk about it. Nice piece.
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