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Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-29-2014, 04:17 PM
Replies: 116
Views: 4,354
Posted By AnyaKimlun
I don't think I gave the reason just what...

I don't think I gave the reason just what happened.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-29-2014, 02:58 PM
Replies: 116
Views: 4,354
Posted By AnyaKimlun
Who says they weren't in the tropics? The bible...

Who says they weren't in the tropics? The bible was never that specific about the position of the Garden of Eden.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-29-2014, 02:48 PM
Replies: 116
Views: 4,354
Posted By AnyaKimlun
ooh good idea, I'm sold. Cain killed Abel with a...

ooh good idea, I'm sold. Cain killed Abel with a coconut.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-29-2014, 02:47 PM
Replies: 116
Views: 4,354
Posted By AnyaKimlun
A lamb/sheep. :) I wonder if a large...

A lamb/sheep.



:) I wonder if a large potato would do it?
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-29-2014, 02:31 PM
Replies: 116
Views: 4,354
Posted By AnyaKimlun
Cain's fruit's of the field were rejected by God....

Cain's fruit's of the field were rejected by God. Whereas God accepted Abel's sacrifice. In a jealous rage Cain picked up a water melon and threw it at his brother.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-29-2014, 02:11 PM
Replies: 116
Views: 4,354
Posted By AnyaKimlun
Personally, I think some kind of heavy fruit or...

Personally, I think some kind of heavy fruit or veg would be more poetic. Or the weapon could be made of bone and leather.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-29-2014, 01:23 PM
Replies: 116
Views: 4,354
Posted By AnyaKimlun
6,000 years ago is around 3,500-4,000 BC so any...

6,000 years ago is around 3,500-4,000 BC so any tools would either be stone or bronze or iron. It depends where exactly in the world they were. I think at about that time there is evidence of steel...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-29-2014, 01:08 PM
Replies: 179
Views: 7,637
Posted By AnyaKimlun
Me too - might restart my YA story but I am...

Me too - might restart my YA story but I am shattered. The floors are taking much more effort than I wanted to spend on them.
Forum: The Intellectual Table 06-28-2014, 01:54 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,273
Posted By AnyaKimlun
It serves a purpose but an extended/tribal style...

It serves a purpose but an extended/tribal style family does work better in many cases.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-28-2014, 01:51 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 836
Posted By AnyaKimlun
The still small voice can well called an...

The still small voice can well called an instinct, Nacia.

God looks after us if we listen and yes it has happened many times in my life.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-27-2014, 06:09 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 614
Posted By AnyaKimlun
Yes I go to one they are really lovely people.

Yes I go to one they are really lovely people.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-26-2014, 01:25 PM
Replies: 179
Views: 7,637
Posted By AnyaKimlun
Sorry I haven't been around as much - I have been...

Sorry I haven't been around as much - I have been decorating my daughter's bedroom.

Last night I had the farewell dinner for my writer's group (we break up for the summer) and have lots of ideas...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-26-2014, 01:22 PM
Replies: 179
Views: 7,637
Posted By AnyaKimlun
Keep going - think of Lot's wife - you will turn...

Keep going - think of Lot's wife - you will turn into a pillar of salt if you look back before reaching your destination.
Forum: The Intellectual Table 06-25-2014, 04:52 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,273
Posted By AnyaKimlun
We faced a similar dilemma. My husband had his...

We faced a similar dilemma. My husband had his own business which involved him being at home all day but also crazy hours.

He decided to take a pay cut and work outside the home but for regular...
Forum: Fiction 06-24-2014, 02:58 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 510
Posted By AnyaKimlun
The piece itself is good but I think it needs to...

The piece itself is good but I think it needs to be much longer and not smack us in the face with so much information. Find a way for Lector to be discussing it with someone or someone to be...
Forum: Fiction 06-24-2014, 11:11 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,709
Posted By AnyaKimlun
Look to see if you need the -ly and tighten up...

Look to see if you need the -ly and tighten up the sentences - that in itself will strengthen the emotion eg:

Where did he go? Tired, numb and aching, I leaned against the tree. How happy I was...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-23-2014, 02:15 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,215
Posted By AnyaKimlun
Don't worry about the beginning until you have...

Don't worry about the beginning until you have finished. Start, write it and then decide.

A lot depends on why he is hanging his head etc. I think your best bet is to write something and post it -...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-23-2014, 12:25 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 2,712
Posted By AnyaKimlun
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mePp1l299EE This...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mePp1l299EE This is my favourite George Harrison.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-23-2014, 12:18 PM
Replies: 121
Views: 6,789
Posted By AnyaKimlun
It is a joke.

It is a joke.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-21-2014, 07:15 PM
Replies: 121
Views: 6,789
Posted By AnyaKimlun
It is a Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy...

It is a Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy reference. Forty-Two is the answer to life, the universe and everything.
Forum: The Intellectual Table 06-21-2014, 07:14 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,273
Posted By AnyaKimlun
I just appreciate the time I get to spend with my...

I just appreciate the time I get to spend with my children. As my goal is independent kids who will leave the nest when it is time - our time together all day everyday is all to brief.

With the...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-21-2014, 01:05 PM
Replies: 164
Views: 5,241
Posted By AnyaKimlun
pins = legs I cannot stand a man who is...

pins = legs

I cannot stand a man who is plucked and oven ready - I like fuzz in all the right places.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-21-2014, 10:50 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 933
Posted By AnyaKimlun
I love the Odyssey but as a child there was a...

I love the Odyssey but as a child there was a cartoon called Ulysses 31. It was basically Odyssey in space but I often get the two confused as a result my Greek mythology can be a little squiffy.
...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-21-2014, 10:32 AM
Replies: 164
Views: 5,241
Posted By AnyaKimlun
Physically I enjoy a nicely rounded backside and...

Physically I enjoy a nicely rounded backside and a nice pair of muscular hairy pins. After than long hair, beard and a little bit of weight.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-21-2014, 09:11 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 933
Posted By AnyaKimlun
Considerably more than I expected to but some of...

Considerably more than I expected to but some of it comes from a history degree in the days when were expected to "read" for that degree:

Plato (I've read almost everything by Plato lol)
Marcus...
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