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Jim Colyer 02-25-2017 09:45 AM

I Like The Idea
 
He listened to my song
Said I Like The Idea
Your idea's fine
It strikes me as real
He talked for a while
Then came for the kill
Said your song sucks
But I Like The Idea

Your rhyme scheme's mixed
Your tenses are wrong
Too few images
And they're not strong
Your singer is good
But I have my own
Your production's weak
It sounds home-grown

He listened to my song
Said I Like The Idea
Your idea's fine
It strikes me as real
He talked for a while
Then came for the kill
Said your song sucks
But I Like The Idea

Then he said something
That made me cry
He told me I should
Go to NSAI
I didn't have the nerve
To tell him the truth
That I'd been that route
With Jason Blume

He wouldn't want my song
Even if he liked it
Cos he's a writer too
He'll write one just like it

He listened to my song
Said I Like The Idea
Your idea's fine
It strikes me as real
He talked for a while
Then came for the kill
Said your song sucks
But I Like The Idea

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